Monday, July 30, 2012

A new story

I started a new writing project, which hopefully will become an actual novel.  The setting is the near future, 25-50 years forward or so, although I haven't fully decided.  There will be three main story lines focusing on upper level government intrigues, civilians trying to make ends meet and a military unit.  Each are struggling with a high-tech post-scarcity world.  Here is the first section.  It isn't polished up yet, so just give it a read and let me know what you think so far.


Private Mark Wabash leaned forward along the sun-baked crumbling ruins of a wall that used to be the side of an upper-middle class townhouse.  It seemed odd to him to see the remains of people’s lives scattered about the streets.  It must have been a rather nice little town, just a few short minutes outside a major commercial hub, central Europe’s answer to the suburbs.  He found it hard to not imagine his own hometown torn into large swaths of pre-defined battle zones, the broken backs of buildings roasting, collapsed in heaps, in the summer sun, carefully calculated to block the greatest numbers of unauthorized routes.
It wasn’t like what he had seen in his school’s historical databases of the mass destruction from the Second World War, the first pinpoint strikes in the Greater Middle Eastern conflicts or even the tactical policing actions in major US cities during the Occupy War.  The damage to those structures was clearly collateral, unplanned, and maybe even accidental.  The scene around him was a nearly perfect execution of battle-space sculpting; each desiccated wall served a purpose.
Not one drone-placed charge, variable-warhead inteli-bomb, or satellite-guided bullet was even a millimeter off their intended targets, and each did exactly the right amount of damage to take down specific support beams and structural pillars.  Wabash even heard rumors that some of the artillery strikes were fired as much as a minute before CENTCOM’s computers detected and validated the hostile intentions of the insurgents here.  That was hours before the official announcement of intent to use force.
He wasn’t really sure how much to trust those rumors, except that they made sense.  After all, the seventh Geneva Convention had banned pre-conflict battle-space sculpting ten years ago.  They passed that resolution just after targeting computers were upgraded to the point they could identify how to bring down any building exactly as desired by taking out specific load bearing beams, like controlled demolitions with a howitzer a hundred miles away.  So, it made sense that the computers would be given the launch authority as soon as the automated police action powers subroutine began to validate the incoming intelligence reports.  How else were they going to be able to legally send the rounds down range?
Of course, several governments sued in protest, but it wasn’t possible to prove any wrong doing, if there had been any, since the first volley was actually fired from the Czechs’ own guns.  That was the price of not upgrading their weapons with better net-security software.  Wabash watched all the same old debates unfold on the unified news feed, in between updating all of his buddies on what virtual reality-TV show he was going to log into, and which censor he was going to troll with his nearly-illegal commentaries and homespun sys-hacks.
That world was a long ways away now that he was standing amid the results of a few millisecond loophole in international law.  The former residents of the remains of a house he knelt by didn’t even have time to realize their entire town was the epicenter of the latest war.  Everything they had was “acquired” by the US military as a strategic roadblock in the ongoing war on digital terror. 
“Sarge, this is bullshit,” Wabash whispered while keeping a watchful eye on the wrecked buildings.  “What the hell are we doing out here.  You know we’re chasing ghosts, right?” 
“Shut the fuck up private,” Sergeant Thomas Barker responded without lowering the binoculars.  “LT wants us out here, so we’re here.  Keep your eyes open and your mouth shut.  Ghosts or not, we’re putting eyes on every square inch of this town if that’s what it takes.”
“Well, fuck sarge, I thought we signed up to fight some goddamn dirty black-hats, not pick through some poor fucks shit,” Wabash quipped while tapping his rifle butt against a broken chuck of a dresser dumped street-side from the house they paused near.  “If I had known this was…”
Wabash was cut off by a quick silent signal from Sgt Barker, his raised fist was followed by orders to look forward.  Training and field experience kicking in, Wabash scrambled up a bit to get a better view, and engaged his tactical hud’s zoom.  In seconds, the urban-ruin landscape in front of the squad came rushing closer to his eyes, and blurry phantom images generated by his heartbeat and naturally unsteadiness of his head started to be scrubbed out by the built in steady-cam software.  A moment later, a stable and clear, if not slightly pixilated image formed in his headset.
As soon as the image had mostly stabilized, data-tags began popping up all across the image.  The live real-world search engine picked through and identified each item that it could, making reconstructions of partially visible items with a 95% accuracy rating.  In less than twenty milliseconds per article, everything Wabash was viewing was analyzed, categorized, cataloged, uploaded to the server, and placed in the world search-map.  Nothing immediately grabbed either Wabash’s attention or tripped any filters in the headset.
“Where?” he grunted to the sergeant, still intently scanning up ahead.
“Two blocks up,” Barker made a sweeping motion forward with two fingers followed by a leftward flick of his wrist, three fingers extended.  “Third building from the right.”
Quickly shifting his focus as directed, Wabash began the automated process of tagging everything visible through the gaping holes in the exterior walls.  An internationally available readymade loveseat found throughout the free world, a coffee table from the same brand, a framed lithograph of a 1930’s Parisian film poster – definitely a middle class home, nice but only on the surface.  After several passes over the entire three-story structure and nothing catching his attention, Wabash glanced over to the sergeant.
                Barker’s eyes were still intently buried in his binoculars, his body perfectly still, but tensioned like a spring waiting to release.  Years of his life had been spent in situations exactly like this one, some far away foreign town over run by junk mechs hacked together from spare parts.  It really didn’t matter how many of these things he put down, the easy-to-come-by digital plans for them were everywhere online, and the integrated real-world search features built into each handheld computer meant that replacement and substitute parts could be found in a matter of seconds.  That is, if you didn’t have your own multi-medium 3D printer.
                With one of those and the right raw materials, you could knock out a hundred combat drones a day, complete with a weapons package that was on par with the latest RDECOM tech.  Hell, sometimes it seemed like before the Army could field its newest top-secret toy, the black-hats would already have completed the next generation.  The boots on the ground might have given the “junk mech” nickname to these Frankenstein machines, but the truth was, they were often more advanced then the next generation war-fighters the Pentagon was just starting to dream up.

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